Re: Read it - Ethan

[Teacher Winget]

Different Hackers, Different Hats

The title of this story is "Differeny Hackers Different Hats." → "Differeny Hackers Different Hats." "Different Hackers, Different Hats."

Black-hat hackers have malicious intentions. They steal people's information and sell it.

White-hat hackers have good intentions.
They make prevent future attack and fix programs → make prevent future attack and fix programs help prevent future attacks and fix programs.

Gray-hat hackers have good intention → intention intentions.
They don't obey the law and use their skill → skill skills in illegal and legal ways.

I think this book is interesting because it gives about types of hackers → gives about types of hackers teaches about different types of hackers.

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Score: A-

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Tips)

• 제목 철자와 쉼표(,)를 꼭 확인해요. (Different, ,)

• "help prevent"는 ‘도와서 막다’라는 뜻이에요. "make prevent"는 자연스럽지 않아요.

• "intention"은 복수로 써야 해서 "intentions"가 맞아요.

• "skill"도 여러 개일 수 있으니까 "skills"로 바꿔요.

• 마지막 문장은 "teaches about~" 같이 자연스럽게 써보면 더 좋아요!