<P>휴.....급조했네요...</P>
<P>personal goal도 에세이 형식으로 5문단 써야하나요?</P>
<P>머리를 쥐어짜도 더이상 생각이 안나네요;;</P>
<P>틀리거나 어색한 점 고쳐주시고 미국인이 읽기 편하도록 내용에 맞게 문단 띄어쓰기 부탁합니다^^ </P>
<P>문단에 글이 모질라면 더 부쳐주시면 감사하겠습니다.... </P>
<P>지식머니 꼭 드릴께요!</P>
<P>* 그리고 질문하나...에세이 타이핑할때요..칸 띄우는거 10칸인가요? </P>
<P>* 이런글도 끝에 regards 붙히나요?</P>
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<P>
PERSONAL GOAL STATEMENT</P>
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<P> My application to
National Academy Museum and School of Fine Arts gives me much pleasure. I am
very eager to study water color and mixed media in your prestigious
school.<BR> Going up
through high school and university in my home country, I have been huge
interested in fine arts and art history. I obtained good curriculum grades in my
high school's art subjects and attended fine arts cultural studies in
the university but, i felt that was not enough to study art.</P>
<P> During that i had
chance to study English in New York City for a year. I have been viewing a lot
of beautiful pictures and paintings and enjoyed it during i was in NYC. The
opprtunity has been such a precious experience because, that made me to decide
to do what i really want in my future. What i want and worth thing to do
for me are to study fine arts.</P>
<P> In other to realize my
desire, i set my personal goal to establish the foundation of water color and
mixed media skill in National Academy Museum and School of Fine Arts at least
one year. After that i aspire to enter art school of degree to be an
artist. I ask to attend for this summer school and program # 3 in page 2. Thank
you so much for reading.</P>
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