Today, I will introduce the first story of this story this episode. Start!!!
The title of the story is "Ruby's Lemonade Stand." Ruby and her friend Louise were selling lemonade through using their grandmother's secret recipe. Max wanted to eat drink this lemonade, but he couldn't because it was for sale. Max was ready with an acorn pencake pancake, and so were Ruby and Louise with their lemonade. However, many people, even their grandmother, bought Ruby and Louise's lemonade. Finally, Max ate drank the lemonade. Now, story 1 of this episode is over. Now, let's start story 2!
Score: B
Tips:
- 'eat lemonade'는 'drink lemonade'로 수정해야 해요.
- 'through'는 'using'으로 수정해서 더 자연스럽게 만들어야 해요.
- 'pencake'는 철자 오류로 'pancake'로 고쳐야 해요.