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'><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Your writing</span></b></p></td>
<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p align=center style='text-align:center;line-height:14.0pt;
'><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>My corrections</span></b></p></td>
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<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'>Today, i saw a movie " Fifty first dates" <br>
That movie is very sweet, cute and beautiful. <br>
I think Drew Barrymore is lovely actress. <br>
The movie's background is very beautiful. <br>
I heard that place is Hawaii. <br>
I want to go there someday. <br>
I felt love is continuously make an effort. <br>
Anyway i am a good feeling after saw the movie.</span></p></td>
<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'>Today, <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:11">i</del></span><span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:11">I</ins></span> saw a movie <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:11">called, </ins></span>" Fifty first dates"<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:11">.</ins></span> <br>
Th<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:11">e</ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:11">at</del></span> movie <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:11">was </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:11">is</del></span> very sweet, cute and beautiful. <br>
I think Drew Barrymore is <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:11">a </ins></span>lovely actress. <br>
The <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:13">background of the scenes in the </ins></span>movie<span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:13">'s background is</del></span> <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:13">was </ins></span>very beautiful. <br>
I heard that <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:13">the </ins></span>place <span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:13">the movie was shot was </ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:13">is</del></span> Hawaii. <br>
I want to go there someday. <br>
I felt <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">that </ins></span>love is <span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">a </ins></span>continuously <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">effort after watching the movie </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">make an effort</del></span>. <br>
Anyway <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">i</del></span><span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">I</ins></span> am <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">feeling </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">a</del></span> good <span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">feeling</del></span> after <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">saw </del></span><span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-04-16T13:14">seeing </ins></span>the movie.</span></p></td>
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<td width=581 colspan=2 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><b><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Comment:</span></b><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'> Great writing! Take a good look my corrections and see if you can do it better next time.</span></p>
<p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><b><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Personal Comment:</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Arial'> I guess the movie was about romance. :-) </span></p></td>
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