Re: 2A-206 (Bella)

[Teacher1]

Benjamin Barnes Goes to School Today, Benjamin goes went to school, he felt excited. When Benjamin arrived at school, he asked "Will you stay with me?" "Ben, you know that mothers aren't to can't stay at school." Mom answered. When arrived he arrived at class, Suddenly, he felt scary scared and whispered "I don't want to go in there." Techer Teacher said get "Get your suppllies supplies," teacher's voice is was friendly but it isn't wasn't mother's voice. So, Then he entranced entered class and play played with friends and introduce theirselves they introduced themselves. After everyone introdice introduced themselves, they play played in the playground. Ben looked for his mother. He ran to mom and talked about school life. I think this book is fun!

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 이야기가 과거에 일어났으므로 현재형이 아닌 과거형을 써야 해요.
2. '무서워하다'는 'scared'를 써보세요.
3. 철자가 틀린 단어들을 주의해서 써보세요. (supplies, teacher)
4. Ben이 친구들과 무슨 놀이를 했는지 자세히 써보면 더 재미있을 것 같아요.
5. Ben이 엄마에게 학교생활에 대해 무슨 이야기를 했는지 예시를 들어보면 좋겠어요.

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