Re: Max & Ruby (Logan)

[Teacher Winget]

Louise and Ruby made a pitcher of lemonade to raise money for their Bunny Scout trip. They used Grandma's special recipe. Let me introduce how they made lemonade. First, add squeezed lemons and sugar properly. Then stir it all of together. Don't forget ice cubes to keep it cool. Finally, put a mint leaf on top. After they finished, each of them drank just a little sip because they will sale were selling it. Max also wanted to taste it; however, he didn't have a nickle nickel. While the girls were selling a glass of lemonade and gathering nickels, he was selling ant and acorn pancakes beside them. Many customers were drank drank lemonade, but nobody bought Max's pancakes. However, Grandma came and bought Max's pancakes. So, Max became Ruby and Louise's last customer. It was a lemonade I didn't really like before, but after this episode, I thought it must be really delicious.

Score: A-

Tips:

1. 'stir it all of'는 'stir it all together'로 고쳐야 해요.
2. 'will sale'는 'were selling', 'nickle'는 'nickel'로 수정해야 해요.
3. 'were drank'는 'drank'로, 'customers'의 철자도 맞춰야 해요.