Re: Caillou- Caillou watches Rosie: Jackson

[Teacher Winget]

This story is about Caillou Watches Rosie.

Caillou and Rosie were having lots of fun playing with Rosie's new toys.
Caillou and Rosie play played loudly.

So his mother said, "Please play quietly because I have a headache."
"Caillou, how about drawing two animals instead? Please be quiet for me," his mom said.

So they drew two animals quietly.
But Rosie draw drew animals on the wall.

So Caillou scold scolded Rosie.
But she crying cried.

So his mom comfort comforted Rosie.

Caillou isn't wanted to big brother → didn't want to be a big brother.
His mom comfort comforted Caillou.

So Caillou helped Mommy clean the wall.
And Rosie played with Caillou.

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Score: B

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Tips 

• 동사 시제를 과거형으로 맞춰야 해요: play → played, draw → drew, scold → scolded 등

• “isn’t wanted to big brother”는 어색한 표현이에요 → didn't want to be a big brother로 고쳐야 해요.

• 대화문은 따옴표와 쉼표를 정확히 써야 문장이 더 자연스러워요.

• Caillou가 왜 형이 되기 싫다고 느꼈는지 한 문장 추가해 보세요.

• 마지막에 둘이 사이좋게 노는 장면을 더 자세히 써 보면 더 따뜻한 이야기예요.