Re: 2A 206 - Felix

[Teacher1]

The title of the book is "Benjamin Barnes Goes to School" Benjamin realizes today is was his first day of go to go to the kindergarden kindergarten and he goes went to kindergarden kindergarten with his mother When he arrives arrived to at the school, he wants wanted to stay with his mom continuously Even so, he starts started to go to the room When Ben introduces introduced himself with sings songs, he's he felt better His sing is When his song was finish finished, who Arthur whispers whispered, "Will you be my friend?" to him It is That was Authur Arthur After everyone's introduce is introductions were finish finished, they eat ate snacks, read read books, and go went to the playground to play It had swings, a slide, and a huge sandbox The time has gone went so fast and it is was time to go to the home Ben tells told to his mom that what happen happened at the kindergarden kindergarten Finally, his first day of school's story is was over

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 단어의 철자를 정확하게 써보세요. (kindergarten, Arthur)
2. 과거 이야기이므로 현재형이 아닌 과거형으로 써야 해요.
3. Ben이 어떤 노래를 불렀는지 써보면 좋겠어요.
4. 놀이터에서 어떤 놀이를 했는지 자세히 써보면 더 재미있을 것 같아요.
5. Ben이 엄마에게 무슨 이야기를 했는지 예시를 들어보면 좋겠어요.