Re: 2a 206 -steven

[Teacher1]

The title of this book is "Beniamin barns Benjamin Barnes goes Goes to school School" One day, Benjamin go went to kidergarden kindergarten He goes went there with his mother when When he arrive arrived at kidergarden kindergarten, many children introduce introduced oneself themselves then Then when they finish there finished their introduce introductions, they eat ate snack, and children go went out and play played in the playground so So, Benjamin can go went to kinderden kindergarten well and arrive arrived home carefull carefully

Score: B-

Tips)

1. 이름과 책 제목의 첫 글자는 대문자로 써야 해요.
2. 단어의 철자를 정확하게 써보세요. (Benjamin, kindergarten)
3. 과거 이야기이므로 현재형이 아닌 과거형으로 써야 해요.
4. 아이들이 놀이터에서 무슨 놀이를 했는지 써보면 좋겠어요.
5. 어떤 간식을 먹었는지 자세히 써보면 더 재미있을 것 같아요.