[Corrected] I was pissed off yesterday!

[Jim Lee]

Your writing	My corrections
I went to 명동 fix my younger sister up with my friend's 후배. In the street it was rush out people for weekend. hot weather, messed street , come latly my friend and specially doesn' good appearance fed me up. After taking about at the moment my friend and me go shopping. She bought skirt, jacket and shoes. I just looked around. I split her then I went to study to english club. I'm tired to go home.	I went to 명동 to  fix my younger sister up with my friend's 후배. On the streets, there were many people rushing to get somewhere In the street it was rush out people for weekend. hot weather, messed street , come latly mMy friend’s후배 came late and specially doesn' good appearance and his appearance was not good.  fed me up. After taking about at the a while later moment my friend and I me go went shopping. She bought a skirt, jacket and shoes. I just looked around. I said good bye to split her. then I went to study to English at an eEnglish club. I'm was tired and went to go home.
Comment: Good writing.   Take a good look at the corrections and see if you can do better next time. Personal Comment: You seem like you had a full day.