Re: Read it unit 6(Bella)

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this book is "The Rocky Road to Success."
I think this book is interesting because successful people were from the first success did not start with immediate success, but today I learned that successful people had setback faced setbacks.
Vincent van Gogh wasn't lucky and poor. And unknown artist was unlucky, poor, and an unknown artist—I think it is so surprisingly very surprising. I learend learned that the Harry Potter writer is children author started as a children's author; I thought this novel's writer was already a famous novelist. My favorite part is Michael Jordon's target Jordan's quote: "I missed 9,000 shots in my career and lost almost 300 games"—this say is so good quote is very inspiring.

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 문법: "were from the first success" 대신 "did not start with immediate success"라고 해야 하고, "say is so good" 대신 "quote is very inspiring"이라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: "왜 Michael Jordan의 말이 특히 인상 깊었는지 더 설명해 보세요. 실패에서 배우는 것이 중요한 이유를 추가할 수도 있어요!"