2차 1교시 2/ 2교시 4

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2012. 1교시 2)

First, the thematic idea of the first poem is that the “I” feel bitter when “I” realizes that my young daughter is growing independent from me. Second, the metaphorical meanings of 1 refers to mother’s concern that younger daughter would not get hurt. The metaphorical meanings of 2 refers that mother think daughter seems to as if a frail child. The metaphorical meanings of 3 indicates young daughter’s physical growth and the meanings of 4 refers the daughter’s independent.

       In terms of the literal meaning, a son can go to the school independently now compared to the two weeks ago when the son is dependent on “I” and his father. In terms of the metaphorically meaning, the parent is sorrowful because they feel that their son has been growing faster within two weeks.

2012. 2교시 4)

As society requires an independent learner who has creativity and originality nowadays, many school try to adopt supervised night self-study. Many students believe that the program can contribute to motivate study environment for them. However, they are also aware of considerable negative effects of the obligatory program. Student can feel as if their right of autonomy is violated.  As a teacher of school B, we should place more weight on the negative aspects.

In aspect of strong point, it enables students to motivate study environment. The atmosphere in which students can study with their friends in the classroom enhances motivation to improve particular subjects or behave in particular ways. To implement this program effectively, teacher can do many things to create a classroom environment that motivates students to learn and behave in ways that promote their long-term success.

In aspect of weak point, it has limitation of students’ rights to autonomous learning. The supervised night self-study takes away the opportunity to learn time management. Because students follow the arranged time, they do not have a chance to learn how to manage their study time efficiently. Also, there are some different studying styles among students; some student pursues environment which can study alone while others pursue environment which can study with their friends. In relation to the former style of students, students' self-study under forced circumstance of teacher rather reduce their autonomy.

In conclusion, although Supervised night self-study offers atmosphere which students can motivate it hinders students from developing self-motivated learning and being an autonomy leaner. Therefore, teacher should not force our students to stay at the school after their regular classes are finished.

[이윤지]

1) thematic idea에 부모가 느끼는 "bitter"라는 감정까지 써주셔서 좋은 것 같아요!when “I” realizes that my young daughter is growing independent from me.이 부분은 저랑 비슷하게 쓰셨어요! 근데 "mother’s concern that younger daughter would not get hurt."이거는 다치지 않을까봐 걱정한다?같아서 would get hurt.가 어떤가 싶어요! 저는 metaphorical meaning of 3이 이해가 안됬는데 썜이 잘 정리해주신 것 같아요! 두번째 문단도 정리 잘해주셨습니다!
2) 제보다 전체적으로 분량도 길고 글의 구조??가 탄탄한 것 같아요!!배우고 갑니다.ㅇ..ㅎㅎ 도입 부분에 배경지식+야자에 대한 부정적 입장을 잘 정리해주셨어요!

[이윤지]

근데 저는 two points가 야자에 대한 부정적 입장/긍정적 입장 한가지 씩이 아니라 입장을 정해서 부정ㅇ적 입장이면 부정적인 점들중 두가지를 고르는 거라고 이해를 했ㅅ어용 ㅠㅠ