Re: Caillou Grows Carrots-이하연

[Teacher1]

The title of the video is “Cailou Grows Carrots “ “Caillou Grows Carrots.”

Caillou went to the backyard because his mother told him to do it go there.

Grandpa was in the backyard. He was planting vegetables.

Caillou helped him, but caillou Caillou didn’t like vegetables.

Grandpa teached taught him how to grow carrots.

Caillou made a sign. Caillou waited for to grow the carrots for the carrots to grow.

Caillou harvested his carrots, and he ate the carrots.

The video is very fun.

Score: B-

Tips):

1. 문법 팁:

   • "teached"는 잘못된 과거형이에요. taught가 맞아요.
   • "waited for to grow the carrots"는 자연스럽지 않아요. waited for the carrots to grow로 고쳐야 해요.

2. 철자 및 대문자 팁:

   • 이름(Caillou)이나 문장의 첫 단어는 항상 대문자로 시작해야 해요.

3. 스토리 팁:

   • 이야기에 Caillou가 어떻게 당근을 기다리면서 느꼈는지 추가해 보세요! 예: "Caillou는 당근이 자라는 것을 기다리며 흥분했어요."
     (Adding Caillou’s emotions while waiting can make the story more relatable!)