Re: 2A-207 (Bella)

[Sub Tutor]

The title of this book is "Turtles to Eat." The main characters are Tommy, his mother, Juan, and his mother.

Tommy asked mother his mother, "Why don't we eat turtles for dinner?" Tommy's family didn't believed didn't believe him and said it is was a riddle. Tommy said, "It's not riddle a riddle. I ate turtle a turtle at Juan's house!" Later, Tommy's mom asked for Juan's mom Juan's mom, "Tommy had good dinner, it likes a good dinner; it tasted like turtle." Juan's mother thinked thought and said, "It is a tortillas was tortillas!" And they went to the Maxican Mexican store. Juan and Tommy looked around the store. Juan's mom explained pictures the pictures. After everything bought they bought everything, Tommy had turtles tortillas for dinner, and he felt somthing real Mexico something real from Mexico.

I think this book is fun.

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Score: B-

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Tips)

1. 대명사: “mother” 앞에 “his”와 같은 대명사를 붙여 “Tommy asked his mother”로 표현해야 누가 질문을 했는지 더 명확해져요.

2. 과거형: “didn't believed”는 과거형에서 틀린 표현입니다. “didn't believe”처럼 “didn't” 뒤에는 기본형을 사용해야 합니다.

3. 불특정 명사 앞에 a 추가: “It's not riddle”와 “I ate turtle”는 자연스럽지 않아요. 특정하지 않은 명사 앞에는 “a”나 “an”을 붙여 “It's not a riddle”와 “I ate a turtle”처럼 씁니다.

4. 시제 일치: “it is a riddle”는 현재형이므로 과거 상황에 맞추려면 “it was a riddle”로 바꾸는 것이 자연스럽습니다.

5. 대화 표현: “thinked”는 올바른 과거형이 아니며, “thought”가 맞는 표현입니다.

6. 쉼표와 세미콜론: “a good dinner, it tasted like turtle”에서 “it” 뒤에 쉼표를 사용하기보다는 세미콜론(;)으로 연결해 “a good dinner; it tasted like turtle”처럼 두 문장을 부드럽게 연결할 수 있어요.

7. 불완전 표현 수정: “something real Mexico”는 자연스럽지 않으므로 “something real from Mexico”처럼 완전한 표현을 써 주세요.