Re: 2A 207-Sofia

[Teacher2]

Title: "Turtles to Eat"

Tommy wanted to eat some turtles tortillas for dinner. He said "Juan's family eat eats the turtles tortillas all the times all the time." But his family didn't know what it is they were. The next day, Tommy's mother met Juan's mother and asked about turtles tortillas. It was tortillas. Juan's mother took them to grocery store the grocery store. It was small but there was were lots to see. Long ago in Mexico, they cooked their food with chili peppers to keep it from spoiling. They had learned to like the pepper taste, so they still eat chilis in many of dishes. Tommy got his wish turtles tortillas for dinner. Through this book, I learned about the Mexican food.

Score: B+

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1. '거북이'와 '또르띠야'는 전혀 다른 음식이에요! 이런 재미있는 오해가 이야기의 중심이 되었네요.
2. 물건이 많을 때는 'was' 대신 'were'를 써야 해요.
3. 'all the time'은 자주 한다는 뜻으로, 's'를 붙이지 않아요.
4. 음식 문화에 대해 더 자세히 쓰면 좋겠어요. 또르띠야가 어떤 맛인지, 어떻게 만드는지 써보세요.