Spring Lake
by D.J. Yoon
The spring breeze whispers to the lake
It tickles soft with every shake.
The lake just giggles, light and bright
And sends up ripples in delight.
Across the water, blossoms fair
Lean down to see the breezy air.
They sway and smile, as if to say
Come dance with us this gentle day.
The spring breeze nods, then skips along
And tickles more with playful song.
The lake can’t help but laugh once more
Its silver waves race to the shore.
Sunlight sparkles, swift and free
It dances on the laughing sea.
The ripples chase the golden gleam
Like children playing in a dream.
A flock of birds goes flying high
With joyful cries across the sky.
Kkarrr kkarrr
They call out loud
A happy, echoing, feathered crowd.
봄 호수
-윤동재
봄바람이 호수를 간질이네
호수가 간지럽다고 웃으니
잔물결이 이네
호수 건너편
산벚꽃이
봄바람에게 눈짓하네
봄바람이 고개를 끄덕이며
한 번 더
호수를 간질이네
호수는 이번에도 참지 못하고
간지럽다고 웃으니 잔물결이 이네
봄 햇살과 잔물결이 앞다투어 내달리네
한 무리의 새 떼
호수 위를
까르르까르르 웃으며 나네
Appreciation Reivew 感想
This poem shows the beauty of spring in a soft and playful way that children can easily enjoy.
The breeze, lake, flowers, and sunlight all act like living friends, which makes the poem feel warm and friendly.
The rhymes are smooth and easy to follow, so it sounds nice when reading aloud.
The images are clear and simple, helping children imagine the scene without difficulty.
The ending with the birds’ cheerful sounds adds fun and energy to the poem.
Overall, this is a bright and lovely poem that is easy to understand and pleasant to read.
#spring #lake #birds #breeze #flowers #sunlight #friends
첫댓글 바람, 호수, 꽃, 햇살이 마치 살아 있는 친구처럼 표현되어 따뜻하고 친근한 느낌을 줍니다. ^_^
감사합니다