Re: Read it-unit 7-Albert

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Title: "Online Anonymity"

In online Online we use anonymity. But I think we should use our real name names. Because it can have help us to catch criminal criminals. In online With anonymity**,** we find it hard to catch cyber criminal cybercriminals. But in with real name names, we can easy easily catch them. And it can reduce cyberbullying. Use Using real name names can make it easyer easier to catch cyber criminal cybercriminals. So they didn't won't cyberbully.

Score: B-

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1. '쉽게'는 'easily'로 써요. 'easy'는 형용사예요.
2. '범죄자'가 여러 명이면 's'를 붙여 'criminals'로 써요.
3. '더 쉽게'는 'easier'로 써요.
4. 실명을 사용할 때의 장점과 단점을 더 자세히 써보세요.
5. 사이버 범죄를 막을 수 있는 다른 방법도 생각해보면 좋겠어요,