[Corrected] Chin up! Miriang...

[Jim Lee]

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Miriang(미량) is one of my classmates and she is also my favorite friend. I think everyone like her because she has a good personality. Most of my classmates are good people. So I'm happy when we get together. I hope that all of my classmates are happy because I like them very much. But we don't have enough time to get together. All of them are bery busy because of their work and study. 미량 is one of them but she always tries to study hard. Today she looked very exhausted. Maybe she didn't get a good mark on her English oral test. It touched my heart. Chin up! 미량... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ May I ask you a favor, again? I have to send an e-mail to my foreign friend who live in 월계동 about how to get to 인사동. If you check the direction, I'll send the mail as soon as I confirm‎ that. Insadong. First, go the Wolgye subway station and take a subway line #1 to Jongro 3ga and then transfer to line #3 to Anguk. After getting off there and go out to Jongro Police Station. From the police station, go up until you see a stationery store. Turn left at the store. There is the beginning of Insadong street. Also, if you want to see a Korean old palace, Keungbok palace you can go there by walking from Insadong.	Miriang(미량) is one of my classmates and she is also my favorite friend. I think everyone likes her because she has a good personality. Most of my classmates are good people. So I'm happy when we get together. I hope that all of my classmates are happy because I like them very much. But we don't have enough time to get together. All of them are bvery busy because of their work and studiesy. 미량 is one of them and but she always tries to study hard. Today she looked very exhausted. Maybe she didn't get a good mark on her English oral test. It touched my heart. Chins up! 미량... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ May I ask you a favor, again? I have to send an e-mail to my foreign friend who lives in 월계동 about how to get to 인사동. If you check the direction, I'll send the mail to my friend as soon as I can confirm‎ that. Insadong. First, go to the Wolgye subway station and take the a subway line #1 to Jongro 3ga station and then transfer to line #3 and go to Anguk station. After getting off the subway there and go out to you must come out of the exit that leads to the Jongro Police Station. From the police station, go straight up until you see a stationery store. Turn left at the store. The street you see There is the beginning of Insadong street. Also, if you want to see a Korean old palace, Keungbok palace, you can go there by walking from Insadong.
Comment: Excellent writing!  You did a good job.  Personal Comment: You seem like a good person.  Does this foreign friend appreciate you?  I hope so. :-)