Re: Read It Unit 8 - Felix

[Teacher Winget]

The title of the book is "Why We Dream."

My thoughts after reading this book are: I rethought my dreams reflected on my dreams.
My over hundred dreams were almost fantasy.
Most of my dreams were fantasies.

One of my dreams was that, one day, i picked up a sword and go to the war I picked up a sword and went to war.
I killed the enemy's king, and i unified two countries unified two countries.
As I sat on the king's chair, the dream is end ended.

I wanted to go back there again when my dream is was over.

Score: A

Tips)

1. 문법: "i picked up a sword and go to the war" 대신 "I picked up a sword and went to war," "the dream is end" 대신 "the dream ended"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: 꿈의 의미나 이 꿈이 당신에게 어떤 영향을 미쳤는지 더 설명하면 글이 더 흥미로워질 것입니다!