Essay - PB 6 주정연 (Chloe)

[하늘누리]

Topic : Are special world events like the Olympics and World cup good for countries? What are good and bad things about

Special world events like the Olympics and World cup are good for countries. because if we are participation in this special world events we can keep good relationship with other coutries.

First, if we are participating in special World events we can keep good relationship with other countries , and our country will know for foreigner. throught this time we can earn a lot of money.

Second, If we are participating is international events we can have a cooperate. because our country's people want win our country. so, people will be support  with other people .

Third, if we are participanting in world events we can introduce our country's natural. so we can earn a lot of money.

But there are existinct bad things.

First, we should spend a lot of money, this events 's time is not long, but we should use a lot of time.

Second, we are partici pation in this events and we are lose. so our feeling will so bad.

Last, Cause this events countries and countries relationship will become a bad.

In conclusion, We should participating in special world events.

[ben teacher]

Special world events like the Olympics and the World Cup are good for countries because if we are participate in these special world events, we can keep good relationships with other countries.

First, if we are participating in special world events, we can keep good relationships with other countries, and our country will be known to foreigners. Throughout this time, we can earn a lot of money.

[ben teacher]

Second, if we are participating in international events, we can cooperate because our country's people want our country to win. So, people will support with other people .
Third, if we are participating in world events, we can introduce our country. So, we can earn a lot of money.

But, there exists bad things.

[ben teacher]

First, we should spend a lot of money, but the events time is not long. We will use a lot of time.

Second, if we participate in events and we lose. Our feelings will be bad.

Last, the events can cause countries relationships to become bad.

In conclusion, we should participate in special world events.

[ben teacher]

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