[Corrected] merit of plastic surgery

[Jim Lee]

Your writing	My corrections
There were many opinions about plastic surgery among my female coworkers in a lunch time today. Some agreed to the plastic surgery the others didn"t agree to do that. Me? ,sure, I agreed with it because it may allow us to have a satisfaction with her(or his) apperance. But we need to know that the plastic surgery don"t give us the apperance like that of some entertaners , models, actors(or actresses). Unless we know it,we must be hard to get the satisfaction after operation. I wii tell the surprising story to you. My friend has worked in cosmetic company, Amore pacific coperation and has a identification concering make up. she now has worked in the field of advertisement of the company and has many opportunity to meet some entertainers. Accoring to her some experiences, Most of them have been operating several times we never do imagene. Some of them is entertainer who we have envyed about her (or his) addicted apperance. And she added that this is not related only female entertainers. Therefore we know that we must be hard to get apperance like that of entertainers at once. To conclude, getting a good apperance is controlled by our will doing aerobic, working out, dieting, and so on. But every people has at last one 결점. Only making up to it with several comestics doesn"t give us much satisfaction whenever we have been in the front of mirror. So I suggest that just operating regarding to the fault is good. I have two questions. one is about the meaning of the word "ruggedize". How I can understand " ruggedized PC-compatible hardware"? The meaning of "ruggedize" I reserched through English -Korean dictionary is the someting hard, unsphisticated,strict and wrinkled. I don"t get the point about it. The other is concering about the sentece "love brings us only short rest". As I writed beforehand, you said it is hard for me not to understand. the true meaning that I will explain of it was "사랑은 우리에게 오직 짧은 휴식만을 줄뿐이다" How can I explain it?	There were many opinions about plastic surgery among my female coworkers during in a lunch time today. Some agreed to the plastic surgery while the others didn’"t agree to do that. Me? ,sSure, I agreed with it because it may allow us to have a satisfaction with her(or his) our appearances. But we need to know that the plastic surgery don’"t give us the appearances like that of some entertainers , models, or actors(or actresses). Unless we know it, we it will be must be hard to get the satisfaction after the operation. I wiill tell you a the surprising story to you. My friend of mine has worked in a cosmetic company, Amore pacific corpoeration and has a make up certificate  identification concering make up. sShe now works has worked in the field of advertisement in of the company and has many opportunitiesy to meet some entertainers. According to her some experiences, Mmost entertainers of them have had been several operationsg several times we never thought possible do imagene. Some of them are is entertainers who we have enviedyed about her (or his) addicted apperance. And she added that this is not related only female entertainers but rather male entertainers as well. Therefore, we know that it is we must be hard to get appearances like that of entertainers with just one operation at once. To conclude, getting a good appearance is controlled by our will to do doing aerobics, working out, dieting, and so on. But every person people has at last one part about their appearance that they don’t like결점. Only making up to it Trying to replace this part with several cosmestics surgery doesn’"t give us much satisfaction whenever we have been in the front of mirror. [So I suggest that just operating regarding to the fault is good.]??? I have two questions. oOne is about the meaning of the word "ruggedize". How I can understand " ruggedized PC-compatible hardware"? The meaning of "ruggedize" I looked into reserched through an English -Korean dictionary and it says that it is the something hard, unsophisticated, strict and wrinkled. I don’"t get the point about it. Ruggedize means: to strengthen the machine for better resistance to wear, stress, and abuse machine을 더 탄탄하게 만든다..라는 뜻이에요. The other is concering about the sentence "love brings us only short rest". As I wrote writed beforehand, you said it is hard for you me not to understand. the true meaning that I wanted to express was will explain of it was "사랑은 우리에게 오직 짧은 휴식만을 줄뿐이다" Love only brings us a short escape from the realities of the world. How can I explain it?
Comment: Great writing!  You are doing a great job. Personal Comment: I am glad to see that you are studying hard.  Keep it up.