Re: Read it summary Joy

[Sub tutor 1]

The book's title is "HOW A VIRUS DESTROYED AN EMPIRE."
When Europeans began to explore other parts of the world, they encountered diseases.

(when ~~ , 문장뒤에 내용 추가하기 유럽인들이 탐험했을 때 , 그들 (유럽인들)은 ~~ 했다 처럼 )
Symptoms included fever, vomiting, and painful rashes covering the whole body.
Another third typically became blind.
Before long, smallpox spread thorough throughout the capital city.

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Score: A-

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Tips)

1. 제목에 큰따옴표("")를 추가해 주세요.

2. "When Europeans began to explore other parts of the world" 뒤에는 문장이 더 필요해요. 예를 들어 "they encountered diseases." 처럼 문장을 연결할 수 있어요.

3. "painful, covering the whole"는 "painful rashes covering the whole body"로 바꾸세요.

4. "thorough"는 "throughout"로 수정해야 해요.