Re: 1C-63 Isabella

[Sub tutor 1]

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The book's title is "Plum Blossoms."
In a small house with a small garden, a girl named Mei lived with her parents.
Mei's favorite flowers were plum blossoms.
In the autumn, Mei would gather the fallen leaves.
One year, Mei got sick while gathering plum leaves in the cold autumn breeze.
One night, under the full moon of October, Mei died.
Her parents were heartbroken.
Late one winter night, Mei's parents had a dream. They saw Mei get up from her bed in bright clothing and float towards the sun.
The next morning, the first plum blossoms of the year appeared.
After I read this book, I think this story was very sad. Because Mei died and Mei's parents were very sad.

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Score: A-

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Tips)

1. "lived a girl named Mei with her parents"는 "a girl named Mei lived with her parents"로 바꿔야 해요.

2. "this book story"는 "this story"로 바꿔야 해요.

3. "Mei was died"는 "Mei died"로 수정해야 해요.

4. "very poor thing"은 "very sad"로 바꾸는 것이 더 자연스러워요.