Re: Summary caillou Joy

[Teacher1]

The book's title is caillou Caillou visits the doctor. The main character is Caillou. One day, Caillou have had a fever. But he was hate hated the hospital. When he went to the hospital, he was scared and cried and called his mother. And I Finally, he finished the examination.

Score: B-

Tips):

1. Remember to use past tense when talking about something that already happened, like "had" instead of "have."
2. Titles of books should always start with a capital letter for each important word, like "Caillou Visits the Doctor."
3. Try to add more details about how Caillou felt or what happened after he finished the examination. For example, did he feel better after seeing the doctor?