수요일5,6 교시 미술교육과 민윤경입니다.

[아오이]

Hello. My name is Min Yun Kyung.

I m majoring in Arts education. The topic which I choose is plastic surgery.

As scientific technique has developed, human beings have more chances to change their shape than before. One of the techniques is plastic surgery, which is considered as an essential element to many people.

I'm agree of the plastic operation.

The great thing about plastic surgery is that the benefits can be both physical and emotional, both external and internal.

The first thing that many people notice after plastic surgery is that their bodies seem more proportional or balanced. Often a nose may appear too large for a particular person's face, or a bust that is too large or too small can blur all an individual's other features making them seem disproportionate.

The second thing that Individuals who undergo cosmetic surgery find themselves emotionally more confident. Patients are no longer self conscious about their physical defects. You can focus on living your life instead of worrying about the way others are looking at you.

Many people worrid about  side effect of plastic surgery.

But, Due to the modern equipments, plastic surgery has reduced many impediments and side effects and provides several outstanding outcomes. Hence, large numbers of people have obtained huge advantages from the plastic surgery.

If some people  have lived incompetent because of inferiority feelings due to the outlook, I think it's not a  bad idea to do plastic surgery for themselves and try to change their attitudes for life. Maybe this wolud make them happier. So, I approve of getting plastic surgeries.

[달이 몇개]

I see. whay don't you take an English writing class?