첫댓글Hello Ken! Thank you for sharing the story of Kim Jip and Yi Yulgok with us. For your better performance, I would like to give you the shortcomings of yours.
First of all, ending sound was unchecked. Provid[ed], Suffer[ed], Follow[ed], Happen[ed] - Try not to miss ending sound!!!
Second, you sometimes speak plural form of word as the singular form. It includes 'offerings' and 'events'. Don't be confused!
Ken, for your next video clip, why don't you make a short introduction? :) I will look forward to your next video clip. Feel free to ask me when your occasion demands.
첫댓글 Hello Ken!
Thank you for sharing the story of Kim Jip and Yi Yulgok with us. For your better performance, I would like to give you the shortcomings of yours.
First of all, ending sound was unchecked.
Provid[ed], Suffer[ed], Follow[ed], Happen[ed] - Try not to miss ending sound!!!
Second, you sometimes speak plural form of word as the singular form. It includes 'offerings' and 'events'. Don't be confused!
Ken, for your next video clip, why don't you make a short introduction? :)
I will look forward to your next video clip. Feel free to ask me when your occasion demands.
From, Brian