[Jim's Correction] Re:drowsiness.....

[Jim Lee]

Your writing	My corrections
Nowdays, a serious matter happened to me. It is right drowsiness.. I don't want to get sleep but I am getting sleep in spite of myself. I didn't know that I was tired until last month but as of this month, I felt sleepy. I clearly sleep enough. So I don't think that I am short of sleep hours. Upon careful consideration, first, I am short of physical strength and power of mind. Second, as the weather become warmer, I am likely to be affected by the weather. So I decided to stay in bed late for the weekend. And beginning next month I will run the playground near my place because study has to be based on physical strength. Drowsiness seems to be related to negligence. Most of the people lost many things because of negligence and so do I. So I will try not to neglect my studies and the things that I have to do.	Nowadays, a serious matter is happening to happened to me. I feel drowsy all the time. It is right drowsiness.. I don't want to get sleep but I am getting sleepy in spite of myself trying to fight it. I didn't know that I was not tired until last month but as of this month, I feel felt sleepy. I clearly sleep enough. So I don't think that I am short of sleep hours. Upon careful consideration, I realized that first, I am short of physical strength and the power of the mind. Second, as the weather becomes warmer, I am likely to be affected by the weather. So I decided to stay in bed late this for the weekend. And beginning of next month I will start running at the playground near my place because studying will be affected by has to be based on my physical strength. Drowsiness seems to be related to negligence. Most of the people loset many things because of negligence and so am do I. So I will try not to neglect my studies and the things that I have to do.
Comment: Great writing!  Getting physically in shape is very important in your studies…it will not only make you more energetic…it will clear your mind as well.