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Before dreaming of a career as a nurse

Recently, more and more students are hoping to major in nursing. The nursing department wants to have a nurse who can teach the necessary knowledge of nursing and take good care of the patient. Also, they learn how to improve people's health and reduce the pain that comes from diseases to help them live happier lives. As the number of nursing and health applications is increasing every year, re-administered students reached 49 percent in 2018. As there are many applicants, the passing line is higher than other departments. But why do so many students want to enter the department of nursing? If we look at the reasons for apㅠplying for nursing, there are reasons such as ' employment rate is higher than others, ' ' you can stay stable once you start, ' and ' you earn 200 a month when you first go to work. '

The reason why most students apply for the nursing department is because of the high employment rate. Let's find out the truth about it. Many of the nation's top universities are admitted to major hospitals when graduating from the nursing department, but few others are employed in major hospitals at other levels. Universities in the upper ranks generally work 50 to 70 percent of higher level hospitals, while nursing departments in other provinces are employed 30 to 40 percent or less. Although the number of those employed at higher hospitals is low in junior colleges, the percentage is significantly lower. Therefore, high employment rate only fits when I am the upper rank university student, not always successful.

As the rate of student support for nursing departments is increasing every year, the pain experienced by nurses such as burning culture is also a big issue. Last Lunar New Year's Day, a new nurse at a large hospital in Seoul killed herself. Many said the burning culture drove a nurse to death. Burn ' refers to the mental and physical harassment that a senior nurse inflicts in teaching a new nurse. All the nurses said that they experienced burning. On May 12, the day of World Nursery, countless nurses shouted in the rain that they would no longer be silent. Patients are happy when the nurse is happy. As we all know, the fire is still burning.

When you choose your job, you usually choose based on interest. Or, considering a variety of collateral factors, such as the future working environment, there are few things that do not lead to pain or frustration. So it is also important to think about what pain I can endure. Students who want to study nursing should also think about whether they can withstand burning.

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마지막 문단에 문장부호가 어색한것이 몇개보여 수정이 필요해보인다. 간호대를 꺼내길래 좋은점을 얘기할줄알았는데 오히려 반대로 주의해야될점을 알려주니 새로웠으며 burning 이라는 단어가 생소했는데 뜻 풀이를 해주어 이해하기쉬웠다