Re: Max and Ruby - Noah

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this episode is Ruby’s Gingerbread House

Ruby , and Louise started to make a gingerbread house for Ruby's grandma.

First, they made glue to use icying sugar using icing sugar.

Second, they attached the decorations used to glue using the glue.

And Max wanted to decorate to use his warm the jelly using his warm jelly.

But they thought it isn't socialize didn't match their gingerbread house.

Nevertheless, he didn't give up to decorate with the jelly decorating with the jelly.

Then, the jelly dropped to onto the glue.

While they saved picked up the jelly, they felt something stranges something strange.

It was feeling was sticky It felt sticky.

So they used the new glue was made of the jelly made from the jelly.

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Score: B+

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Tips 

• • “icying sugar” → icing sugar가 맞는 철자예요.

  • “isn’t socialize”는 문법에 맞지 않아요. “didn’t match” (잘 어울리지 않았다)로 고치면 자연스러워요.

  • “saved the jelly”는 영어에서는 보통 “구하다”는 뜻이라 여기서는 pick up (줍다) 가 더 맞아요.

  • “something stranges”는 틀린 표현이에요. something strange (이상한 어떤 것)이 맞아요.

  • 문장 순서를 조금 정리하면 더 자연스러워져요.

  • 젤리를 풀로 쓰게 된 걸 더 재미있게 설명해 보세요.

  • 할머니가 완성된 집을 보고 어떤 반응을 했는지도 한 문장 추가해 보세요.