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'><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Your writing</span></b></p></td>
<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p align=center style='text-align:center;line-height:14.0pt;
'><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>My corrections</span></b></p></td>
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<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'>Today's holiday. <br>
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I'm free from the work so that I could have the only time for me. <br>
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I could take a rest at home for a day. <br>
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To get up late in the morning is the biggest present to me. <br>
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With being lie in my bed(?) I watched the TV. <br>
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And then I was tiding up my desk as well as I cleaned the room. <br>
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It seems to be clean my mind too. <br>
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There is not something special but it means so valuable time to me. <br>
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Above all I think.</span></p></td>
<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'>Today's <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-05-03T17:14">a </ins></span>holiday. <br>
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I'm free from <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-05-03T17:14">the</del></span> work <span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:14">and </ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:14">so</del></span> that <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-05-03T17:14">means </ins></span>I could have <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:14">some </ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:14">the only</del></span> time for<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-05-03T17:14"> myself</ins></span> <span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:14">me</del></span>. <br>
<br>
I could take a rest at home for a day. <br>
<br>
To get up late in the morning is the biggest present to me. <br>
<br>
<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:15">While laying </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-05-03T17:15">With being lie</del></span> in my bed(?) I watched <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:15">the </del></span>TV. <br>
<br>
And <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-05-03T17:15">then </del></span>I <span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:15">also tidied </ins></span><span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:15">was tiding</del></span> up my desk <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">and </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">as well as I</del></span> cleaned the room. <br>
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<span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">It seems to be </del></span><span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">This seems to </ins></span>clean my mind <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">as well </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">too</del></span>. <br>
<br>
There is not<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee"
datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">hing </ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:16"> something</del></span> special <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">that is happening </ins></span>but it means so <span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">valuable time</del></span> <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">much </ins></span>to me. <br>
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<span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:Jim%20Lee" datetime="2004-05-03T17:16">Above all I think</del></span>.</span></p></td>
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<td width=581 colspan=2 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><b><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Comment:</span></b><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'> Good! Take a good look my corrections and see if you can do it better next time.</span></p>
<p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><b><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Personal Comment:</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Arial'> I guess we all need a day to just stay home and relax.</span></p></td>
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