2401공규태

[공규태]

about honesty

whenever I live think about honesty. and I take honesty to heart. my view of life is "always honesty". and I think the honesty is very important in people society. this reason why honesty is important in people society.

first, honesty is gives us belief.

belief is need to everywhere, and everytime. if people didn't have belief to you, it is fatal hit. it makes you very annoy. people think you are not honesty guy, and they didn't help you. it is not good for you in you life.

second, honesty can make money.

if you work at enterprise, you need to honesty. open and aboveboard management is good example. open and aboveboard management gives belief and customer buy their stuff. it is good for enterprise image making and customer can believe honesty enterprise. and it is another example american taxidriver find 35million dollar diamond owner. one day the taxidriver working usual day. one customer drop his brown sack. but taxidriver didn't open that when he arrive his company. when he open in his company, the sack has big diamond and telephone name tag. the taxi driver didn't think stealing and he call that number. the owner is running jewel shop and he didn't know until he calling. the owner give big reward and the taxidriver get money,

third, honesty make clean society.

if society have honesty people, they can make clean society. every body don't steal, and any bad moving such as rape, brutal murther and lie. because honesty people's think is not bad and desire. clean society makes our metal cleaning, and we don't need to think about the bill.

in conclusion,

one people say the honesty is the best reliable fortune. my opinion is not different that words. the honesty lead me success and I believe honesty power. I think honesty is not ability. it is just essentially element.

Mr. hwa soo, I will become.

[김의영]

this essay is wirtten your brain??

[최부경]

Structure of essay is very good, and content also very good

[안석훈]

your essay is so poor. you are so a child. come to me with improved skill of O-MOK. AND get out of earth.

[kimhyunjae]

I agree with your opinion. Beacuse your idea is very reasonable

[이동화]

Essay is good, if paragraph should have existed, It is easy to read

[전우경]

your esseay is too boring

[강현호]

I also think that always honesty is important in society nowadays

[이승혁]

Your essay is bad. Because my eyes is sick.

[안석훈]

your essay is indecisive. tlak correctly your idea.

[김경태]

very short .. hey guy . Are you kidding?

[김경태]

sorry

[신재하]

Amaizing ! Your determination is very firm. I hope that your promise keep forever.

[배지용]

Wow! this essay is the best thing i've ever seen.

[서민재]

agree with you. today our society is so competitive. It so dry

[구종훈]

this essay is good but I think this is so short.

[이상현]

this story is good for something but ti is short to make sense

[조성민]

I think this essay is well done but I think this is so short.