Louise and Ruby makes made lemonade and tell talked about the price.
They taste tasted the lemonade and says said "Delicious." Max wanted lemonade, but they didn't give him any.
They made a stand, and Ruby makes made and stuck a price list.
Max gives gave ant acorn pancakes, but they said "Disgusting!"
Then Mrs. Huffington came to their stand, and she buy bought a lemonade and drink drank it.
She said, "I invited my friends." After she left, Max made a stand.
It was an ant acorn pancake stand.
The visitors to his stand left.
Grandma coming came to their stand, visited Max's stand, and buy bought a pancake!!
So, Max buys bought lemonade with that money.
I think this book is interesting.
Score: B+
Tips:
- 'makes'는 'made'로, 'says'는 'said'로 고쳐야 해요.
- 'buy'는 과거형으로 'bought', 'drink'는 'drank'로 수정해야 해요.
- 'talked about the price'로 수정해서 문장을 더 명확하게 만들 수 있어요.