Re: 2A 241 - Ethan

[이다경]

The title of this story is "First Flight."

One day, Tommy helped his father carry suitcases into terminal the terminal.
It was Tommy's first time to ride riding a plane, so he was excited.
The jet plane was very tall, so the oil truck seem seemed small.
A stwardess stewardess led Tommy to a seat by the window.

The plane started to go, and the engine made a sound like lions roaring.
Bubbles popped in his ears, and he swallowed.

He also saw the pilot and the co-pilot.
He didn't want to land because Tommy thought it was funny fun.

The plane skimming skimmed along, and finally they landed.

I think this book is interesting because it gives information about airplanes.

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Score: Ao

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Tips)

• "into terminal" → "into the terminal"처럼 앞에 the를 넣어야 해요.

• "first time to ride"는 "first time riding"이라고 써야 자연스러워요.

• "seem"은 과거니까 seemed로 바꿔야 해요.

• "stwardess"는 철자가 틀렸고, stewardess가 맞아요.

• "funny"는 "웃긴"이라는 뜻이라 여기서는 "재미있는" 뜻의 fun이 더 어울려요.

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