Re: 1c-Rai

[이다경]

The book's title is Ali baba Ali Baba and the forty thieves Forty Thieves.
Ali Baba is was wood cuter a woodcutter at in the mountain.
And His brother is jewer seller was a jewelry seller at in the city.
Oneday One day, Ali found the theives thieves get getting many jewelry jewels.
Ali and his brother came to there their cave and getting got jewelry.
Ali make made the circle road circle trail to the cave and make them confuse the thieves confused the thieves.

After reading this story, I think Ali is was so smart.

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Score: B+

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Tips)

• 과거 이야기니까 동사는 과거형으로 써야 해요. (is → was, make → made)

• "wood cutter"는 하나의 직업이라서 붙여 쓰고, 앞에 "a"를 붙여야 해요.

• "there"는 장소를 말할 때 쓰고, **"their"**는 "그들의"라는 뜻이에요.

• "make them confuse the thieves"는 말이 어색해요. "confused the thieves"처럼 간단하게 쓰면 더 자연스러워요.