[Corrected] Let's study hard!

[Jim Lee]

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I started to study some subjects to take the middle term test. You know I don’t go to school so I have to study all of them I take by myself. Two of them are Chinese and Japanese classes. They are the most difficult things to study. I think it is crazy to take two language classes in this semester. I just wanted to study both languages but it is too difficult. When I was in Canada, I used to live with a Japanese housemate. At that time, I hoped that I had known Japanese. You know there are a lot of Japanese people in Toronto and it is easy to make friends with them. I went to Toronto to study English but if I also learn Japanese, I can catch two birds with one stone. Anyway, it motivated me to study Japanese. I used to have a boyfriend who is from Hong-Kong in Toronto. I asked him to teach Chinese but it was really hard because I didn’t know how to pronounce it. He taught me it on the phone. You can imagine how hard it was. Even though I broke up with him, I want to learn Chinese in a normal way many people do. I hope I master both languages someday. Can I? I like to travel and I hope I can go to Japan and China to practice my language skills I obtained. That means I have to study them hard now. I will get back to my desk and start to study them. Oops! It is a little late and I am getting sleepy.ㅜ.ㅜ I’d better do it tomorrow. Bye for now!	I started to study some subjects for to take the mid-dle term test. You know I don’t go to school so I have to study all the subjects of them I take by myself. Two of them are Chinese and Japanese classes. They are the most difficult classes I havethings to study. I think it is crazy to take two language classes in this semester. I just wanted to study both languages but it is too difficult. When I was in Canada, I used to live with a Japanese housemate. At that time, I hoped that I had known Japanese. You know there are a lot of Japanese people in Toronto and it is easy to make friends with them. I went to Toronto to study English but if I could havealso learned Japanese, I could have killed can catch two birds with one stone. Anyway, it motivated me to study Japanese. I used to have a boyfriend who is from Hong-Kong in Toronto. I asked him to teach me Chinese but it was really hard because I didn’t know how to pronounce it. He taught me a little it on the phone. You can imagine how hard it was. Even though I broke up with him, I still want to learn Chinese in a normal way many people do. I hope I can master both languages someday. Can I? I like to travel and I hope I can go to Japan and China to practice my language skills I will obtained. That means I have to study them hard now. I will get back to my desk and start to study them. Oops! It is a little late and I am getting sleepy.ㅜ.ㅜ I’d better do it tomorrow. Bye for now!
Comment: Excellent writing.  You are doing a great job.  Keep it up! Personal comment: Learning Chinese would be interesting.  I used to have some Chinese friends back in Toronto also and I think the language is very interesting.  Anyway, keep studying and you will be able to speak four different languages. :-)