Re: Max and Ruby (Austin)

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this book is Max's Work of Art.
Ruby and Louise are painting the fruit because they have to put their paintings on display in the rabbit hole Bunny Scouts exhibition. But Max ruined the painting, and eventually, Max became a model. Ruby and Lewis Louise paint Max, and when they're laughing, Grandma also paints praises Ruby and Louise. Now, episode one is over with this story.

Score: B+

Tips:

1. 'Rabbit hole exhibition'은 'Bunny Scouts exhibition'으로 바꿔야 해요.
2. 'Lewis' 대신 'Louise'로 수정해주세요.
3. 'Grandma also paints Ruby and Lewis'는 'Grandma also praises Ruby and Louise'로 고치는 게 더 적절해요.
4. 'Max ruined the painting' 부분에서 Max가 어떻게 망쳤는지 더 자세히 설명해주면 좋겠어요.