My Favorite/ least favorite place
When I take a walk along the shoreline and get a clear view, my mind gets lighter as a feather and my head becomes clearer. In summer, the clear and coolness of the beach makes my heart goes pit-a-pat just as I am jumping for joy on a trampoline. The beat of the waves on the beach takes my ears. Stepping soft and warm sand makes me think as if I am walking on a cloud. Seashells on the sand seem like bright gems. At night, enjoying fireworks on the beach adds festiveness. Also, the gleam of the sea at night set the scene for sensibility.
I hate wherever there is grass. I am afraid of every insect including flying bugs. The buzzing sound of insects makes me feel terrible just like bugs are climbing on my body. A lawn that looks like somebody painted with green paint is my least favorite place.
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