2019년 7-8월호(최종본)

[137기 이영은]

tone up cream.docx

Tone-up Cream

137기 이영은

   ‘Is it spring now? Or summer?’ No matter how I forget about day or date (because I am a cabin crew), but at that moment, I was very confused. Last May, I experienced an early heat and it evoked my fear memory of last summer’s extremely hot weather. According to the Meteorological Administration of Korea, the heat will be strong in this summer too. However, there is nothing to worry about. Fortunately, this is because the majority of weather forecasts expects that this summer would be better than last year. Phew! What a relief!

    Usually, the heat and make-up are somewhat antagonistic. Have you ever gone outside with make-up in very hot weather? Although I did basic skin care carefully and my make-up seemed perfect, I found my make-up was almost gone after few hours. So, how can I make my makeup last longer in hot and humid weather?

    These days, cosmetic industry is introducing a lot of natural and sustainable make-up products for summer season. At the center, there is “Tone-up Cream.” It is a whitening functional cosmetic, which was often used for covering freckle and pigmentation in the past. Contrary to the thick cover make-up with BB cream or CC cream, tone-up cream smooths out the skin depending on people’s skin tone and type. In addition, it makes skin look natural and improves the skin tone brightly at once. Therefore, as the light make-up is becoming a trend, tone-up cream has emerged as a must-have-item among many kinds of cosmetics these days.

    Tone-up cream can offer cost saving. If you have one, you don’t have to buy other cosmetics such as BB cream, CC cream or Primer. Just evenly apply it on the face and neck after basic skin care and then go! During the hot summer, tone-up cream would be helpful to the people who are tired of heavy make-up. If you don’t like to show your naked face to people or if you are sick of putting on a make-up, please keep it in mind: Tone-up Cream.

evoke 불러일으키다

Meteorological Administration 기상청

antagonistic 상극인

freckle 주근깨

pigmentation 색소 침착

emerge 떠오르다, 부상하다

cost saving 비용절감

evenly 골고루

[김이랑]

마지막문단에서 on the face and the neck에서 neck앞에 the를 빼도될거같아요 ! 나머지 이상없습니다:)

[susan8211]

세번 째 문단 which was often used for freckle and pigmentation in the past
-> which was often used for covering freckles and pigmentation 으로 중간에 "covering" 추가해주시면 될 것 같아용!

[kgb0403]

영은수정사항
1. 첫번째 단락 다섯번째 줄 the majority of weather forecasts expect that this summer is better than last year.에서 the majority가 주어니 expects로 수정 그리고 that절에서 예상이니 is는 어색하네요 가장법으로 해서 would be 또는 could be가 맞을거 같습니다. the majority of weather forecasts expects that this summer would be better than last year.

[김다솜 (193)]

선배님, 2번째문단 첫번째 문장에서 heat 앞에 the 추가드립니다:)
3본째 문단 tone-up cream smooth out the skin depending on their skin tone and type 에서 smooths out 으로 단수동사 처리 부탁드립니다!
그리고 여기 their skin에서 their을 지칭하는게 누구인지가 잘 안드러나는 것 같아서 people’s 이나 personal 로 쓰시는건 어떤지 의견드립니다!:)

수고하셨습니다!

[이승훈185]

두번째 문장 마지막에 원래 문장도 좋으나 화장하고 몇시간만 밖에 있으면 계속 지워지는 화장때문에 고민하는 내용이 직전에 나오고 다음 문단에 더위에도 화장을 편하게 유지할 수 있는 방법이 나오니까 so how can I make my makeup last longer in hot (and humid) weather? 로 바꿔보는건 어떨까 합니다!