[Corrected] A drowsy day^^

[Jim Lee]

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Hi Jim..^^ It is deep into the night..^^ Thesedays I realized that the autumn boasts of its blue, clean and cool weather with a gentle breeze. In the afternoon , when I came from the language institute to the library, I couldn't help sleeping but I don't know why I was falling into drowsiness. To wake me up, I took a rest for a moment in the university campus bench with some beverage. But when I studied again, I was still sleepy. It is difficult to keep concentrating on my work. In the evening, when I came home for eat dinner, I took a nap about 30 minutes. At that time, I was alone at home. So if my friend didn't call to me, I couldn't wake up. After eat dinner, when I went to the institute(toeic reading class), I feel good.^^ At that time, I felt that taking a rest is good for me. After the class,I went to library again. At night,fortunately, I could concentrate on my studying. Even though I am always sitting at a desk, I have doubt about the efficiency. ^^ Oh..~~ It is very deep into the night. I am anxious about tomorrow. How i can handle tomorrow without drowsiness. I have to go to bed..^^ now.. good nite^^ see you....	Hi Jim..^^ It is deep into the night..^^ Thesedays I realized that the autumn boasts of its blue, clean and cool weather with a gentle breeze. In the afternoon , when I went came to the library from the language institute to the library, I couldn't help falling asleeping andbut I don't know why I was falling into drowsiness. To wake myself me up, I took a breakrest for a moment in the university campus bench with some beverage. But when I started studyingied again, I was still sleepy. It wasis difficult to keep concentrating on my work. In the evening, when I came home to for eat dinner, I took a nap for about 30 minutes. At that time, I was alone at home. So if my friend didn't call to me, I probably wouldn’t have woken up couldn't wake up. After eating dinner, when I went to the institute(toeic reading class), I felt el good.^^ At that time, I felt that taking a nap rest was is good for me. After the class, I went to the library again. At night, fortunately, I could concentrate on my studying. Even though I am always sitting at a desk, I have some doubts about the efficiency of my studying. ^^ Oh..~~ It is very deep into the night. I am anxious about tomorrow. How Ii can handle tomorrow without being drowsyiness. I have to go to bed..^^ now.. good nite^^ see you....
Comment: Excellent work!  You are a very impressive person.  I commend your effort and I can see that your English is going to improve very much soon. Personal comment: If you feel sleepy, it’s refreshing take a 5 minute power nap at your desk.  Keep up the great effort!

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Thanks for your good tip.. I will try it on tomorrow^^