The book's title is Big Brother Caillou. The main character is Caillou. One day, Caillou(')s mom (have) had a baby. She (go) went to the hospital tomorrow. Caillou was happy. The next day(,) Caillou(')s mom and dad came from the hospital and (They) they (have) had a baby. Caillou (think) thought (she) the baby was cute. But mom and dad (was) were busy and mom and dad didn't pay attention to Caillou. (Many time after passing) After some time passed, Caillou (love) loved his sister and he (hug) hugged his sister.
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Tips)
- 사람들의 이름이나 'I' 같은 단어는 항상 대문자로 써요.
- Caillou의 기분 변화를 더 자세히 설명해보세요.
- Caillou가 동생을 어떻게 도와주었는지 예를 들어 써보세요.
- 이야기의 끝 부분에 Caillou가 배운 점을 추가해보세요.