Re: Charlotte 안녕자두야

[Teacher Winget]

Jadoo, Julian and Joyo played the soccer played soccer. But Granny go with things went with some things. Its vedy heavy It was very heavy. Julian bothered bothered Jadoo. So Jadoo hit Julian**’s** soccer ball.

Jadoo and Joyo play played the arm wrestling arm wrestling. Then, Jadoo won.

Jadoo arrived at home, she discovered the pink dress. She wanted that it. At the school, Jadoo treaded tripped on the skirt. So she fell down. But the dress is was Jadoo’s young sister’s younger sister’s.

Score: B+

Tips)
과거 이야기니까 동사를 과거형으로 써요 (play → played, go → went).
soccer 앞에는 “the”를 안 써요.
It’s는 It is, 과거는 It was를 써요.
younger처럼 비교급 표현도 연습해 보세요!