[Corrected] Do you believe in fortune?

[Jim Lee]

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Do you remember my sad love story I said before? At that time I told you about the man who seem to love me secretly. Do you konw Cyworld which is popular website among young adult. I often had visited his homepage on the Cyworld and scripted his picture, his writing to my homepage. Even though I didn't love him, I felt like being familiar with him over the years. He has a good personality , many friends and ,first of all, treated me with kind. So I often had thought of him and missed him. The lucky happening was occured last weekend. When I visted his homepage,I was picked on the EVENT which mean the owner of homepage gives the presents the special number's(like 777,888,999..) visitors. I was a his 5555th visitor. After all He knew my secret visiting. I at first was very embarassing and very shameful. However He soon visited my homepage and wrote with a very uncredible brightness.	Do you remember my sad love story I had told you said before? At that time, I had told you about a the man who seemed to have loved me secretly. Do you knowonw Cyworld which is a popular website among young adults nowadays. I often had visited his homepage on the Cyworld and scripted his picture, and his writing to my homepage. Even though I didn't love him, I felt like being familiar with him over the years. He has a good personality and, many friends but most of all  and ,first of all, he treated me with kindly. So I often had thought of him and missed him. TheA lucky thing happened happening was occured last weekend. When I visited his homepage, I was picked as the winner. on the EVENT which This means that the owner of the homepage gives a the presents to the special visitor number's(like 777,888,999..) visitors. I was a his 5555th visitor. After all He knew my secret visiting. I at first was very embarasseding and very shameful. However Hhe soon visited my homepage and wrote with a very uncredible brightness letter.
Comment: Good writing!  Personal Comment: I had a difficult time understanding some parts.  However, I am glad to hear that good things are happening to you.