Seeing Off
by D.J. Yoon
In the dreary rain
At dawn, when only streetlights are awake
A motorcycle passes
Laden with crates of milk
A woman, not yet fifty
Rides through the rain
Wrapped in a raincoat
A helmet on her head
On my way to work
Umbrella in hand
I stop for a moment
And watch her
Until she fades from sight
For now
All I can offer
Is this
To see her off
With my eyes
Surely, she too must dream
Of wearing beautiful clothes
Of painting her fingernails
A brilliant shade of red
Behind her
As the motorcycle rattles away
Its crates of milk
Stacked high and trembling
The rainwater
Has already begun
To gather in puddles
배웅
-윤동재
비가 후줄근히 내리는
가로등만 눈뜬 새벽
우유를 가득 실은
오토바이를 몰고
아직 쉰은 되지 않은 것 같은
여자가 간다
비옷 입고
헬멧을 쓰고
출근길
우산을 쓰고
가던 길 잠시 멈춰
그 여자가
안 보일 때까지
지금
내가 해 줄 수 있는 건
고작
눈으로 하는 배웅
예쁜 옷을 입고
손톱에
붉은 매니큐어를 칠하고 싶은 마음
그 여자도 물론 있겠지
덜컹거리는 우유 상자 포개 실은
오토바이를 몰고
그 여자가
지나간 자국
금방금방
빗물 고이고 있다
Simple Review 感想
‘Seeing Off is a beautiful and touching poem about kindness, understanding, and care for others.
The poem describes a woman delivering milk on a motorcycle in the rain early in the morning.
As the speaker watches her pass by, he thinks about her hard work and the dreams she may have in her heart.
Although she works in difficult conditions, she may also wish to wear pretty clothes and paint her nails bright red, just like anyone else.
The speaker cannot do much to help her, but he stops for a moment and watches her until she disappears.
This small action shows his warm heart and deep respect for her.
The rain and the puddles at the end of the poem create a quiet and slightly sad feeling, reminding us that her difficult day is still going on.
Through simple words and gentle images, the poet shows us the beauty of caring for people we often pass without noticing.
’Seeing Off‘ reminds us that even a small act of kindness, such as looking at someone with care and understanding, can have a deep meaning.
It is a warm and thoughtful poem that encourages us to see the lives, struggles, and dreams of ordinary people with more love and compassion.
#milk #motorcycle #dawn
첫댓글 '배웅'은 타인을 향한 따뜻한 관심과 이해, 그리고 배려의 마음을 아름답고 감동적으로 담아낸 시입니다. 시인은 소박한 언어와 잔잔한 풍경을 통해 우리가 평소 무심코 지나치는 평범한 사람들의 삶에도 아름다움과 소중한 꿈이 깃들어 있음을 보여줍니다. ^-^
배달의 고단함 끝에, 가볍게 아침을 먹고 커피향을 마주하고 시를 쓰고있을 오십대 우유 배달녀, 그리워요!
새벽에 요가 가는 길에 자주 마주쳤던 우유 배달 이모, 생각나요...
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