Re: Max and Ruby (Alexander)

[Teacher Winget]

They will go went to grandmother's house. They made a mailbox. Max put mail the mail in the mailbox. Max gave mail for the mail to grandmother. Cherry Slime Dribbler is grandmother's favorite. "Let's squeeze that delicious slime dribbler all over the top of my cake!" said grandmother. Ruby and Louise sent mail for sent mail to each other. Grandmother came to Ruby's house. Seashells are grandmother's favorite. Last Finally, Max showed up with the cake. I think this book is funny.

Score: B+

Tips:

• 'will go'는 'went'로 과거형으로 바꿔야 해요.
• 'mail for'는 'the mail to'로 수정하는 게 맞아요.
• 'sent mail for'는 'sent mail to'로 고쳐야 해요.
• 'Last'는 'Finally'로 바꾸면 더 자연스러워요.