Re: summary-우규나

[Teacher1]

The title of the story is "Caillou Walks a Dog."

He met a puppy while playing ball.

Caillou's neighbor asked him from going to go for a walk together
→ to go for a walk together.

Caillou's father allowed them to take a walk with the puppy.

Caillou crossed the street with her his dog.

Caillou threw the ball.
Her His dog brought the ball back.

They also enjoyed playing other games.

Caillou wanted to have a dog,
but he has had a cat.

The cat's name was Gilbert.

So Caillou's father said he had to think about it more.

The next morning, Caillou found his dog doll.
It was a gift from his parents.

Caillou tied a leash to the dog doll
and pretended that the dog doll was a real puppy.

Lastly, he pretended to waIk walk the dog doll!

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Score: Ao

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Tips)

• 대명사: Caillou는 남자니까 her dog → his dog으로 바꿔야 해요.

• 표현 다듬기: “asked him from going to go”는 자연스럽게 → asked him to go로 바꾸는 게 좋아요.

• 내용 흐름: Caillou의 소원과 아기자기한 행동이 너무 귀엽게 잘 담겼어요! 🐶🧸💕

규나 정말 잘했어요! 이야기의 순서도 좋고, 감정도 잘 담긴 멋진 글이에요 😊👏