Re: Max and Ruby (Jia)

[Teacher Winget]

Max wanted to found find his monster mask.

During the concert practice, Ruby continue kept hiccupping.

They found a cure for hiccups in a curebook book.

While they were trying to stop Ruby's hiccups, Max steel found was still looking for the monster mask.

They tried different ways to stop the hiccups.

Max couldn't find his monster mask, so Ruby advised him to play with other toys.

When Max was playing and making loud noises, Ruby and Louise were surprised and went upstairs.

Then, Ruby and Max’s grandmother surprised them, and Max found his monster mask.

Finally, Ruby's hiccups stopped.

In the end, Max wore the monster mask, hiccupped, and everyone laughed.

Score: B+

Tips:

• ‘found’는 과거형이므로 ‘find’로 수정합니다.
• ‘continue’는 진행형으로 바꿔서 ‘kept hiccupping’으로 고치는 것이 자연스럽습니다.
• 'curebook'보다는 'book'이 더 적합한 표현입니다.