Re: Max&Ruby (Bella)

[Teacher Winget]

Today is Valentine day Valentine’s Day. Ruby and Louise makes make Valentine’s cards. Max wants to make valentines Valentine’s too! So, he makes a Valentine card to for his grandmother. Max spills glue, so Max kept putting mail in the mailbox. Then Louise and Ruby makes make Valentine’s cards, using vartious various toppings. Max makes a Valentine again, and Max going goes to deliver it to granma Grandma to give her the Valentine. Then Louise and Ruby changes exchange Valentine’s cards with each other. Max and Grandmather Grandmother bring a Valentine cake.

Score: B+

Tips:

• 'Valentine day'는 'Valentine’s Day'로 고쳐요.
• 'makes'는 'make'로, 동사와 주어가 맞도록 수정해 주세요.
• 'to his grandmother'는 'for his grandmother'로 고쳐야 해요.
• 'various'는 철자를 고쳐서 'various'로 바꿔 주세요.
• 'going to deliver'는 'goes to deliver'로 수정해서 자연스럽게 만드세요.