Re: Stell-plum Blossoms

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In a small house with a small garden lived a girl named Mei with her parents.

Mei's favorite flowers were the plum blossoms.

When the summer rain came, the garden was green with life and plums grew ripe from the plum tree.

One year, Mei got sick while gathering plum leaves in the cold autumn breeze.

One night, under the full moon of october October, Mei died.
설명: October는 달 이름이라서 첫 글자를 대문자로 써요.

The summer rains came and brought the garden to life.

Her parents decided to say prayer a prayer for her under the plum tree every day of autumn.
설명: prayer는 하나의 기도를 말할 때 a prayer라고 써요.

Late one winter night, Mei's parents had a dream.

Score: A-

Tips)
이야기의 흐름이 아주 잘 이어져요.
Mei의 부모님이 어떤 꿈을 꾸었는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어져요.