Honer^^

[emily]

Lead : I get honer

Where : I get honer in the studio.

How : I get honer in the studio with other students

When : I get honer in the studio with other students yesterday.

Situation : There were many students who were get honers and take a photograph.

Result : I get honer from jung-dong schoolmaster that I was very happy and I was proud too.

            So I proud to my parents.

Feeling : I think I don't forget it. Because it was important memory to me.

Will : I weilli must wrote a good write.Because I want good write. I will do my best.  

                                                              After revising

      I get honer in the studio with other students yesterday.

  There were many students who were get honers and take a photograph.

  I get honer from jung-dong schoolmaster that I was very happy and I was proud too.

  So I proud to my parents.

  I think I don't forget it. Because it was important memory to me.

  I weilli must wrote a good write.Because I want good write. I will do my best.  

[김윤정~~~~~~~~!]

good

[Robin(김희경)]

I guess you got a prize~~~ What kind of prize did you get? I also proud of you, because you are doing very well ~~~ Do yout best~~~

[하늘천사]

GOOD