[Corrected] oh..my god.. the result of mock test...is at 500 level..

[Jim Lee]

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today.. i got a test of preparation for toeic... my senior gave me the preparation book that had just arrived .. and. i had thought of taking the test right now.. but..i couldn't catch what they said exatly after the test.. i started to mark the score of that... oh..my god.. my ability for toeic was too bad... it shocked me.. as you know.. i have ever been abroad .and the day that i came korea was only a month ago... but.. i will not be frustrated ... now.. i know my level in toeic and english ... so.. i will never give up my goal..and put more time on studying toeic.. ... see ya... jim.. have a nice weekend.. ^^	Ttoday.. I i wrote a TOEIC mock testgot a test of preparation for toeic... Mmy senior gave me the mockpreparation book test that had just arrived .. and. Ii had taken thought of taking the test right now.. Bbut..Ii couldn't catch what they said exactly Aafter the test.. Ii checked my scorestarted to mark the score of that... Ooh..my Ggod!.. my score ability for toeic was too bad... Actually it shocked me.. as you know.. Ii have ever been abroad .and the day that Ii came back to Kkorea was only a month ago... Bbut.. Ii will not be frustrated ... now.. Ii know my level in TOEICtoeic and Eenglish ... so.. Ii will never give up on my goal..and put more time on studying for the TOEICtoeic.. ... see ya... Jjim.. Hhave a nice weekend.. ^^
Comment: Good work!  Take a good look at my corrections and see if you can do it better next time. Personal comment: Taking the TOEIC test once and thinking that you score is bad is not wise.  Try it again and see how you do again.  I think if you continue solving the TOEIC test, your score will change.  Anyway, I am glad to see that your determination of achieving your goal is strong.  Keep studying and you will get there in no time. :-)